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Post by Takixe190 on Oct 24, 2009 18:18:08 GMT -5
Name; Branda Harpsorcerer
Gender; Female
Height; Unknown..... In the middle.
Age; 18
Species; Elf
Appearance; Beautiful Elf with long, flowing brown hair, long eyelashes, and amber eyes.
Personality; Sarcastic, powerful, and not shy at all. (not scared either!)
History; Unknown.
Weapons; Sword, Bow and arrow, knifes, magic, ect.
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Post by «βѳв» on Oct 24, 2009 18:20:26 GMT -5
Please expand a bit more. Remember; at least four sentences for each.
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Post by omio on Oct 25, 2009 14:40:03 GMT -5
Yes, as Bob said. We're aware that brevity may be the soul of wit, but honestly, there is a point where wit can be too far-condensed to be understood because its density is too great. Therefore, instead of sinking in and staying, it kinda goes stright through, and doesn't really do anything.
Use other character profiles as an example. You'll be able to get a better idea on what we expect.
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