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Post by Takixe190 on Apr 4, 2010 20:16:26 GMT -5
Name; Josh Shieldheart Gender; Male Height; Unknown, but he's tall Age; 17 Species; Half Demon Appearance; Have you seen Cloud from FF7? Now, you have seen both Cloud and Josh! <3 Personality;Quiet and solemn. Cool! I spelled it right! He has mood changes. Frequently. One minute, he'll be all mean to everyone, next he's cheerful and happy! History; A witch placed a curse on him when he turned twelve. Whenever he got angry, he'd start turning into a demon. Rather annoying for him! Weapons; Those. And cool demon-ness.
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Post by «βѳв» on Apr 4, 2010 20:31:24 GMT -5
Please be a bit more specific. At least five sentences (TRY to do ten, Alice, since you ARE a moderator).
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Post by Takixe190 on Apr 5, 2010 14:58:05 GMT -5
Name; Josh Shieldheart. Yep. Thats his name. Yes indeedy, yes indeed.... One more sentence! Gender; Male. Male. Male. Male. Male. Height; Unknown, but he's tall. Well... Medium. Um.. You know.. Cloud Strife's hight? Final Fantasy 7's Cloud.. Yeah.. Age; 17. Seventeen. 17. 1. 7. Species; Josh is a half demon. I know, awesome. When he gets angered, he either changes into a very scary looking monster or a part of him becomes inhuman and spiky. Awesome, isn't it? Um... Yeah. Other then that, he's human.. Appearance; Have you seen Cloud from FF7? Well.. Thats what he looks like. Spiky blond hair green eyes. I know, awesome. cache.kotaku.com/assets/resources/2007/06/ffvii_remake_500.jpgPersonality; Quiet and solemn. Cool! I spelled it right! He has mood changes. Frequently. One minute, he'll be all mean to everyone, next he's cheerful and happy! History; A witch placed a curse on him when he turned twelve. Whenever he got angry, he'd start turning into a demon. Rather annoying for him! Weapons; [image] Those. And cool demon-ness. Yeah. Cool swords, cool demonness...
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Post by «βѳв» on Apr 5, 2010 18:54:13 GMT -5
Alice...you know what I meant. Stop being so sarcastic, as well. You know I like sarcasm more then anyone, but I REALLY need the bios to be good. And, seeing as you haven't written one good bio yet...please. Refer to some of the other bios written here, as you ARE a moderator (for now, anyway).
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Post by Takixe190 on Apr 5, 2010 19:26:30 GMT -5
Hang on, hang on. I'm fixing it... *grumbles... Name; Josh Shieldheart. Male. Male. Height; Unknown, but he's tall. Well... Medium. Um.. You know.. Cloud Strife's hight? Final Fantasy 7's Cloud.. Yeah.. Age; 17. Species; Josh is a half demon. I know, awesome. When he gets angered, he either changes into a very scary looking monster or a part of him becomes inhuman and spiky. Awesome, isn't it? Um... Yeah. Other then that, he's human.. Appearance; Have you seen Cloud from FF7? Well.. Thats what he looks like. Spiky blond hair green eyes. I know, awesome. cache.kotaku.com/assets/resources/2007/06/ffvii_remake_500.jpgPersonality; Quiet and solemn. Cool! I spelled it right! He has mood changes. Frequently. One minute, he'll be all mean to everyone, next he's cheerful and happy! History; A witch placed a curse on him when he turned twelve. Whenever he got angry, he'd start turning into a demon. Rather annoying for him! Also, as a demon, he- Never mind. That belongs down one. ANywho.. A witch cursed him and he has been trying to find her. He hasn't succeeded yet, but he hopefully soon will. Weapons; [image] Those. And cool demon-ness. Yeah. Cool swords, cool demonness... When he is demon, he's rather scary with spikes and everything.
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Post by «βѳв» on Apr 5, 2010 20:07:59 GMT -5
Again, PLEASE look at other bios. You're a moderator. It needs to look more professional and actually sound better.
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Post by Takixe190 on Apr 6, 2010 8:20:52 GMT -5
ARGH! IM GETTING SO ANNOYED! JUST UN MOD ME AND ACCEPT!
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Post by «βѳв» on Apr 6, 2010 17:07:48 GMT -5
All right. He's accepted. But, you're going to be a member from now on.
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Post by omio on Apr 8, 2010 11:27:05 GMT -5
Bob, to be honest, I would have denied this. 1) Buster Sword. What the #311 is that thing's weight? Close to 40 lbs? Not easy to wield by any standards. Nearly impossible to wield by a human. Hard as fsck to even carry. Especially if you're modeling after Cloud for body shape and all. Unrealistic? Oh yeah. 2) The wording at areas are awkward. You might as well take a kitchen knife to your own fingers with those sentences. They technically make sense, but when they're slapped together, you're trying to mix a golem with a cat. It blends like oil and water would. 3) Cloud Strife's height is very well known. Just go find the booklet for FF7 and read it up. I believe he's 6'3", if I recall right. [Researches.] Official site: 5'7" 4) "Half demon": 120,000 results. "Part demon": 141,000 results. And that's just quizzes and major media. Imagine if I used Dogpile or Bing? Yeah. Billions. But, since Bob approved, I'm just squabbling.
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Post by Takixe190 on Apr 8, 2010 13:07:23 GMT -5
You are a word I am not allowed to use on this site.
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Post by «βѳв» on Apr 8, 2010 19:40:32 GMT -5
Locking this thread.
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